Token - a short animation, is now online for your viewing pleasure.
You can see it via Jimzip Productions' cinema section.
Enjoy!
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thoughts are now mine:
sav
said...
Your animation is very very good! I especially like your class scenes and your voice acting - It's suits the character your acting for. I giggle everytime derek starts running...Cute. Is that the way you run in real life? LOL!! Then there is the part where he gravitates, and objects in the class turns green. Very nice effort on your part. The Texturing is nice too. Lots of procedural textures and they are effective. When the boulder rolls towards him, Derek appears to be calm and collected but in my mind i know that he's thinking of which button to press. Maybe make him check the distance of the boulder for ever 5 seconds or so, that would make your movie more suspenseful. But man when it came to the part where he floats up and everything becomes Matrix-Ee, There is pretty much some nice cinematic qualities about that. The soundtrack is cool too. Energetic, sortof, but not the kind you would hear at school, but refreshing!!
I think it's really good. Congrats for finishing your course. :)
Thanks Savann. Glad you liked it. I sure wish I could have had en extra month to fix up all my little nitpicks, but I'm really just relieved it's over. Let the holidays begin! Haha. Cheers Savann,
yeah considering what happened and you need to go overseas to hongkong.
so is aaron mcochlan a tutor at rmit? The other day, i think this week, I accidently emailed him by mistake. I was emailing a friend but somehow i also emailed him....hehe.
4 thoughts are now mine:
Your animation is very very good! I especially like your class scenes and your voice acting - It's suits the character your acting for. I giggle everytime derek starts running...Cute. Is that the way you run in real life? LOL!!
Then there is the part where he gravitates, and objects in the class turns green. Very nice effort on your part. The Texturing is nice too. Lots of procedural textures and they are effective. When the boulder rolls towards him, Derek appears to be calm and collected but in my mind i know that he's thinking of which button to press. Maybe make him check the distance of the boulder for ever 5 seconds or so, that would make your movie more suspenseful. But man when it came to the part where he floats up and everything becomes Matrix-Ee, There is pretty much some nice cinematic qualities about that. The soundtrack is cool too. Energetic, sortof, but not the kind you would hear at school, but refreshing!!
I think it's really good. Congrats for finishing your course. :)
-sav
Thanks Savann. Glad you liked it.
I sure wish I could have had en extra month to fix up all my little nitpicks, but I'm really just relieved it's over.
Let the holidays begin! Haha.
Cheers Savann,
Jimzip :D
yeah considering what happened and you need to go overseas to hongkong.
so is aaron mcochlan a tutor at rmit? The other day, i think this week, I accidently emailed him by mistake. I was emailing a friend but somehow i also emailed him....hehe.
cheers and Let the holidays begin!!!! muhaha,
-sav
That was entertaining :)
Good luck in your assessment :)
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